Initial Written Feedback from Music Video First Draft

At first, we showed the first draft to one classmate as we weren't ready for a screening of our video. The video was at the point where there were many things that needed tweaking and the purpose of this feedback session was only really for any big changes we needed to make, for the small things such as lighting issues were all being changed anyway.

We received this email:

From this our actions are:

• We agree with all the points Jason made in his replying email, therefore we will implement all of his ideas into our video
• To explain however,
• We will include more shots of lead singer and the band performing because it enhances the performance element of the music video and builds up the star image of a band. In addition this replaces the tunnel shots because they were too saturated in the music video and it diverts attention from our narrative
• We will replace medium shots of the lead singer with closeups of the instruments being played because they work well with loud noises in the song, for example when the drums play they make the video more enjoyable to watch
• Another element we will adjust is that we will include quick cuts during the chorus, while also implementing the technique of jump cuts as both these work well with faced paced songs and it makes the chorus more special and fun to watch
• Lastly including more effects makes the video more interesting and enhances the narrative of our music video therefore they are always a good idea to implement into our video